After speaking to Amar and Andrea we had some really useful advice which we will definitely use.
For example using cross dissolves throughout to soften the scenes together as at the moment they are quite harsh, especially due to the colour change.
Also Amar said that we should make the colour difference even more extreme. As well as this he said that we should use the photos more with overlaying it on other scenes.
Also to maybe use transitions which blur the edges more to reflect it more as a memory.
He said it was a very good storyline with alot of emotion which is great.
Also he said maybe have the sunset at the beginning and very slowly at the end to add to the emotion.
We don't need anymore footage unless we want to re film the artist from different angles to make it not so long in one angle view.
The memory bit with the photos and the memories overall we could use the grain/texture tool over the top to emphasise the memory aspect.
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